| 2005-08-16 15:16:03 |
Me, my four best friends and my sister
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too short not enough details 4/10 |
| 2006-04-27 23:28:29 |
Me, my four best friends and my sister
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| 2006-10-19 14:44:14 |
Me, my four best friends and my sister
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Great idea, but needed FAR more details. I think you could have elongated this to four or five chapters at least. Hot, though! |
| 2006-11-08 02:01:28 |
Me, my four best friends and my sister
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| 2007-01-21 04:48:07 |
Me, my four best friends and my sister
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Slow down. This supposed to be an erotic story. It might be a good framework to construct a story but each incident needs to be expanded in loving and lustful detail. |