| 2005-08-10 16:57:37 |
SWEET SOPHIE !!
|
Good story overall, could have added more details in some parts to make it longer, but still good job. 9/10 |
| 2005-08-10 17:32:39 |
SWEET SOPHIE !!
|
great start. now, let's continue with the next chapter or two or more. |
| 2005-08-10 19:26:35 |
SWEET SOPHIE !!
|
Brill, just the right amount of force. you need to deflower her in chapter 2, then why not pass her round your friends - remember thats what friends are for! |
| 2005-08-11 11:09:27 |
SWEET SOPHIE !!
|
very good story. turned me on a lot when you gagged her and tied her up. Definitely make a part two. |
| 2005-08-12 16:48:48 |
SWEET SOPHIE !!
|
great 10/10 |