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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2005-08-31 04:55:25 | SWEET SOPHIE !! | u fuckin liar! Eat shit |
2005-08-31 04:55:25 | SWEET SOPHIE !! | u fuckin liar! Eat shit |
2005-09-02 16:45:55 | SWEET SOPHIE !! | u shoulda just went along with what she wanted but all in all great! |
2005-09-05 00:02:50 | SWEET SOPHIE !! | I think the whole 'oh look she is laying on the floor while I sit behind her' cliche has been pretty well beat to a pulp. Obviously, nobody actually buys this contrived piece of crap, but hey thats what fiction is for. You command of dialogue isn't very commanding. Its a shame you turned this into a rape story, you almost had a good thing going. Keep trying. |
2005-09-05 03:08:31 | SWEET SOPHIE !! | Should of been labeled rape, might be a true story but I doubt it. Not a big fan of anal but it was good for what it was. 7/10 |