| 2006-11-14 17:14:36 |
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yea maybe you could have some lesbian action between adrian and amy when they have a 4some |
| 2006-11-21 05:30:59 |
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I enjoy the way you write, though sometimes you jump between characters and it gets a little confusing. There are also some minour spelling errors, but other than that, wonderful job. :) |
| 2006-12-24 03:05:14 |
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Dude, you have a gift. I hope this story doesn't end any time soon. Keep up the great writing. 10/10 |
| 2007-01-02 13:57:58 |
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omg.....do it |
| 2007-01-19 00:20:12 |
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WRITE MORE |