| 2005-10-31 18:18:34 |
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this is some really brilliant writing man. you should definitly see about getting these things published in a book or something. |
| 2005-11-09 16:47:42 |
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FUCKING HELL, I LOVE THIS SHIT, WRITE, WRITE, WRITE, WRITE! |
| 2005-11-29 18:01:12 |
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These are some of the best stories I have ever read. Keep it up. |
| 2005-12-08 00:20:43 |
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I love the continuation, still need to work on informing the reader who's saying what before it's said, but nothing too confusing. Beautiful descriptions, though some details are unnecessary. 9/10 |
| 2005-12-15 16:55:59 |
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u better keep writing!!!!:) I have jacked myself like 1million times from this story!! |