| 2006-12-17 22:25:30 |
Harry Potter and the sleeping beauty
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yeah its alright 9/10 work on spelling and keep writing |
| 2006-12-18 08:52:19 |
Harry Potter and the sleeping beauty
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hot stuffs ! but uh , paragraphing the whole thing properly would be good . but yeah this story was nice . |
| 2007-01-03 18:26:33 |
Harry Potter and the sleeping beauty
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great story but no paragraphs make it harder to read 9/10 |
| 2007-01-07 01:43:41 |
Harry Potter and the sleeping beauty
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tell me did he wrote the story or did u guy´s?? i promis u he like´d it and so did i :D but paragraph??? fuck that this is suppose to be like this and u can´t tell me it´s bad.. and if some1 don´t like the story don´t read it u fuck head´s |
| 2007-02-24 21:08:16 |
Harry Potter and the sleeping beauty
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fucking gay shit heads u reading a fucking hot story and all u can do it says theres no paragraphs wat are u 12 yr olds who cant read with out paragraphs there |