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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-31 02:36:55 | Harry Potter and the sleeping beauty | i agree. good story. write what happens after. 10/10 |
| 2007-06-03 09:52:45 | Harry Potter and the sleeping beauty | couple of things. Spellin not great but i can live with that. Paragraphs would be good and most importantly, if you want to make this a believabe Harry Potter story then you should write it in the third person not the first. Eg. 'Harry came back from detention' rather than 'I came back from detention'. All in all an alright story, 6/10 |
| 2007-06-22 22:49:10 | Harry Potter and the sleeping beauty | bull shit this is fucked up!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2007-06-23 12:35:43 | Harry Potter and the sleeping beauty | awsome |
| 2007-07-09 00:24:21 | Harry Potter and the sleeping beauty | nice story,but how the hell are you harry potter?? the guy doesnt fucking exist its a fiction!! a made up charchter for god sakes!!!what do you do??fuck yourself thinking of grangers ass?? mudblood! |