2005-08-16 17:50:53 |
My first experiences
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5th grade writing 1/10 |
2005-08-16 22:52:13 |
My first experiences
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this story made me cum 3 times write more |
2005-08-23 16:44:36 |
My first experiences
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It would have been a lot better story if the writing had been better. Also what is a slip? |
2005-08-31 22:32:08 |
My first experiences
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it was a good story but your spelling broke my concentration. i too want to know what a slip is? i did'nt know whether it was a male or a female subject. igave it a 4 only because of the story content. |
2005-09-16 02:46:33 |
My first experiences
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slip is the underwear or boxers...i do believe |