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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-11-15 17:45:09 | My first Time_(22) | sorry try again actully plz dont ! |
| 2007-10-07 10:03:56 | My first Time_(22) | i just read your story. yes it was short but you have the right idea. Its good but short. Whar i would hav suggested is get a bit of background information about you and your girlfriend just to create tension. Also i would suggest moer detail in what happened. Surely more went on and if not you could still elaborate on what did happen. Good Luck |
| 2006-07-21 09:04:41 | The defloration of sweet michelle | bad spelling... no time line... bad story, is this your first? try to look on some of the other storys on the high score. |
| 2006-07-21 16:41:02 | The defloration of sweet michelle | You and this story suck frist michelle 13 then she 16 |
| 2006-07-25 03:39:27 | The defloration of sweet michelle | hey trell you didn't look to good at the ages dickhead it said she was 16. stop being a dumb ass |