| 2005-08-25 23:01:10 |
Me and My Cousin_(1)
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I'd prefer if that was the end... |
| 2005-09-24 23:51:14 |
Me and My Cousin_(1)
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Well, I came to this story by accident, but I have to say it's pretty bad. There's no motivation for the two characters to screw. The description was poor, and the spelling and capitalization was wretched. If you can't even capitalize "I" and the beginnings of your sentences, you need some serious proofreading help. |
| 2005-10-05 18:39:08 |
Me and My Cousin_(1)
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I hope you weren't born in an english speaking country, because you're english is horrible! |
| 2005-11-05 20:40:25 |
Me and My Cousin_(1)
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Hi, Ithought your story was very good. I do believe that you should use spell check. I think some of these coments were a little overly rude, and sarcastic. I do think there should have been more foreplay, before the anal penatration. I would have been licking your inner thighs, with my moist hot tongue. Then kissing, licking snd sucking your sac, and balls. Then thay sweet tender spot between yuor balls, and your hot lucious bung hole. Then I would work your hot bung hole with my tongue, to lube it really well. Then when I knew you are ready, and can't take much more, I would make you bung hole mine, and slowly work my trobbing cock deeper and deeper. If we both came at the same time that would be a delightful bonus in our sexual adventure together:) SWEET! |
| 2005-11-08 01:06:37 |
Me and My Cousin_(1)
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I'm a girl but I LOVE gay boys, Loved the story, made me cum twice, I couldn't resist playing with myself. My fantasy is to watch two gay boys fuck and masterbate while watching. |