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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-08-24 11:08:34 | How I Became Big Sister's Sex Slave | great, maybe a little more description near the end, but otherwise brilliant. 9/10 |
| 2005-08-24 11:31:21 | How I Became Big Sister's Sex Slave | 10/10 |
| 2005-08-24 14:45:34 | How I Became Big Sister's Sex Slave | got me going, write more to this story please |
| 2005-08-24 15:25:36 | How I Became Big Sister's Sex Slave | if only they had another sister....... |
| 2005-08-24 18:13:24 | How I Became Big Sister's Sex Slave | Thanks for the comments guys...glad most of you seemed to like it. I see room for some improvements, but the next installment will be coming up soon. Da Man, thanks for the helpful comment...I agree that maybe the end could use some work, but I was trying for a lead-in to the next installment. Indy, what specifically didn't you like about it? A comment like, "Not much here" is totally useless in helping me to improve. Any suggestions or just mindless criticism? |