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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-08-27 20:24:53 | Jane_(0) | Ya, the end session was definitly descriptive and good, but it had nothing on Splurges, good job Splurge! (10/10) |
| 2005-09-05 22:42:57 | Jane_(0) | fuck her good you bastard |
| 2005-09-05 23:21:05 | Jane_(0) | very good story but i think its a little like a anatomy lesson its better than words like dick and cunt but words likre areolea and labia take away from the sexiness of it aside from that its very good and the charaters are very real please write part two. ... |
| 2005-09-06 00:09:53 | Jane_(0) | (10/10) Too bad you sound too much like a doctor decribing a woman's anatomy - erotic words would have set me off with out yanking it. I would have liked a good deep penetration as an ending with a massive climax ! |
| 2005-09-06 09:46:06 | Jane_(0) | USING WORDS LIKE 'COWPER'S GLAND FLUIDS" (FOR PRE-CUM) AND "TESTICLES" (INSTEAD OF "BALLS" OR "NUTS") AND "PUDENDA" MARKS YOU AS A STIFF! YOU SHOULD BE LOOKING FOR A RHYME SCHEME TO USE IN YOUR NEXT BOOK OF POETRY, NOT LOOKING FOR ANOTHER WAY TO WRITE PORN. I'LL GIVE YOU A HINT: REALLY JUICY/HOT SEX IS DESCRIBED WITH BEST WITH FOUR LETTER WORDS WRITTEN WITH SOME PACE AND RHYTHM. AND, MANY OF THOSE WORDS END WITH THE LETTERS "C" & "K" LIKE COCK, FUCK, LICK, SUCK, DICK, PRICK, |