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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-06 17:48:18 | Jane_(0) | I found it exciting but Dick and Jane should have met at the sex organs. Do a second part to have both of them fucking and sucking each other and with the man squirting his semen in her pussy. |
| 2005-09-06 17:52:53 | Jane_(0) | It's a pleasure to read a story that pays some attention to detail and diction. Keep up the stellar writing and let the naysayers wallow in their own misery. Good writing is truly erotic. It's a compliment that you opted against the uncouth words others recommended. Best of luck, good chap. |
| 2005-09-07 10:18:48 | Jane_(0) | The first (10/10) I have ever given |
| 2005-09-07 11:49:54 | Jane_(0) | I HOPE THERE'S A PART 2.............. |
| 2005-09-08 04:35:17 | Jane_(0) | Now I've read them both, and they're great. Man what a lover. but intercourse is missing. Is there a part between 1 & 2 that i've missed? hot writing, u gotta 10. r |