| 2005-09-06 09:46:04 |
Course of Treatment
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Ladies and gentlemen, all hail the King. Gary, this may well be the best crafted story I have read at this site. I normally read these stories with a very clinical eye and almost never get aroused. This was a rare exception. Your dialogue was spot on, the descriptions were outstanding, the charaters were very well developed. Depth, passion, conflict, and great sex. I told someone at this site that I only gave my own stories 7-8s and I would only give D H Lawarence a 9, I am going to give you a 9 as well. A few teeny suggestions, give us a little background on how the good dr came by his prowess. At a few points he makes comments that would suggest he was a psychiatrist rather then a psychologist, you may want to check that. Still, an exceptional story, well written. Splendid. |