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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-06 10:10:54 | The Crew | Hot story, loved the lead-in, the action, and accoplishment. I'm waiting for more, maybe some p.s.a. i gv u a 10. r |
| 2005-09-06 10:36:25 | The Crew | Good premise, good structure, a little too formulaic. If you are going to write a very predictable story, you need to mix things up a little. Also, and I know this is a personal pet peeve of mine; be a good writer, not a statistician. Tell us she is tall and thin with firm heavy breasts, and the she has the legs of a runner. Don't just throw a bunch of numbers (bra, height, wieght, dick length), describe stuff. Its a good basic story but you have the ability to make it better, keep trying. |
| 2005-09-06 11:31:28 | The Crew | What a slut. Where are these hot twats. Send a few over here. |
| 2005-09-14 13:42:33 | The Crew | DAMM GOOD READING, THIS I GAVE A 10/ PLEASE CONTINUE, MAYBE ADD THE WIFE FROM NEXTDOOR OR THE AVON LADY.OR HER 3 TEENAGE DAUGHTERS ????????? IGNORE THE 'OLDFUCKER'. HE PROBABLY HAS NO LIFE? |
| 2005-09-15 06:55:46 | The Crew | good story, better that all the other incest and weirdo porn stories that are on here!! |