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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-24 17:00:47 | MY COUSIN'S CHERRY | Hey Will--Get your cousin to read some of the stories where cousins are fucking cousins. It might give her something to think about and might get you some good fucking in the near future. Don't just sit on your ass and wait for her to come to you. Get her in front of a computer and just ask her if she wants to read some XXX stories. If she says yes, then you've got her where you want her. Gave this story a 4/10. |
| 2007-06-29 14:15:44 | MY COUSIN'S CHERRY | shit u fucking jew ass wankeing piece of motehr fucking shit, or shud i say cousin fucking shit |
| 2005-09-22 19:38:26 | My New Life_(3) | pretty shit! not even worth a vote |
| 2005-09-23 09:00:17 | My New Life_(3) | Learn to write - way too much intro, and no paragraph breaks. Not horrible, but needs work. |
| 2005-09-24 01:02:50 | My New Life_(3) | If you know well enough to warn us about spelling errors, you can take the time to proof read your story and find them. The sex is too abrupt to be as arousing as it should be. I have no problem with the introduction paragraphs, but the transition from that to the sex scene is awkward. Many independent clauses joined with conjunctions (and, but, and the like) don't give the reader a chance to properly process information and have an effect similar to a run-on sentence. I hope you're in college. A freshman comp class will do good things for you. |