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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-26 10:29:23 | Quadruplets-Part 2 | i dont care who wrote it just carry on with next session |
| 2005-09-26 10:39:32 | Quadruplets-Part 2 | OK, the writing and structure is not bad, but are we really supposed to believe that these are high school kids? Sounds like the rantings of somebody who did not get laid much in high school trying to create a little alternate reality. Keep writing though. |
| 2005-09-26 11:27:24 | Quadruplets-Part 2 | Write the whole series and post it here. after good reviews, sell the script to a porn company, make them give an offer, and tell them to add around 500 bucks. You should make a nice sum, be able to quit your job, and write more scripts for them. |
| 2005-09-26 11:40:36 | Quadruplets-Part 2 | Yes, Please, please write more, i really dig the beginning of an excellent story line. i wouldn't mind if the action developed sex between the children of the same sex, but i am twisted. U gotta 10 for story. r |
| 2005-09-26 12:01:05 | Quadruplets-Part 2 | Sure, keep writing. The possibilities are nearly endless. I hope Mom is hot. And Dad is horny. |