| 2005-09-27 18:21:32 |
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ABSOLUTELY FAN FUCKING TASTIC>> |
| 2005-09-27 19:48:19 |
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C - R - A -P still spells crap, that is what this is, pure crap 1/10 |
| 2005-09-27 21:08:43 |
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not a bad plot and not a bad story i like it its easy flowin and crap is full of himself lol. to be honest im curious to know why the shower has six heads, get to writing it man its 9 out of 10 right now and cant go down in my eyes. beautifuly written. kudos |
| 2005-09-27 21:30:49 |
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Keep writing man this is really good stuff, dont listen to all those retards who say it suxs. For the next one you could have the parents pretend to be mad at them and then join them, or something like that, just keep it going! |
| 2005-09-27 21:44:51 |
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chapter 3 is a must |