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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-04 10:29:01 | The Story_(0) | I think your story is very fake and made up. You dont use slang like the average teenager does nowadays and it seems like a person over 30 wroe this.. Totally fake.. sorry |
| 2005-10-04 18:47:12 | The Story_(0) | Great story, i loved it, just watch you're clear about who's speaking; break it up a bit. 10/10 make part 2! |
| 2005-10-04 18:50:18 | The Story_(0) | as being a teenager who had almost this exact same thing happen to me, this story is 95% accurate with the exception of that paragraph that the author said was fake. the guy below me can go blow himself, it was awesome. perfect descriptions and everything, make sure you write part two, and try and seperate the speech from the text. also, think about explaining whos saying what, cuz when the girl was explaining, it got confusing |
| 2005-10-04 21:36:19 | The Story_(0) | There's one more reson we kicked your ass Hitler. You suck. Great story, but got a little confusing sometimes. All in all 10/10. |
| 2005-10-05 22:10:11 | The Story_(0) | Who? what ? where/ when, with who? Just a confusing story that does not define who the hell is envolved. why not try to have someone proof read. |