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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-03 05:45:33 | New York_(0) | Even though it's short, you still need to break it up into paragraphs. The description was excellent, and the action was intense. Please spell "you're" right. (i,e, damn, you're hot!) Two exclamation points are always enough. Short and sweet-- I enjoyed it. |
| 2005-10-05 10:31:17 | New York_(0) | Reminds me of my traveling days. If I felt like writing I could fill a few pages. |
| 2006-01-22 19:36:26 | New York_(0) | I loved it!!!!!!! |
| 2005-10-04 19:39:36 | Brad's First Time | that was hot.....i wish it was me. |
| 2005-10-04 19:46:27 | Brad's First Time | i'm waiting right here for the next chapter...hot hot hot |