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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-20 22:48:05 | Slutty Slut | nice story try to proof read very good descriptions. well done 7/10 |
| 2005-10-21 16:04:08 | Slutty Slut | Rusty Rusty, aside from all remarks from "English Majors", the story was alright. The intro and background seemed kind of rushed. True, you should of broken it down to chapters, but not a bad effort. I give ya a 8/10, awesome job on the "Requiem for a Dream" reference.....y'all know what I am talking about. |
| 2005-10-21 21:39:40 | Slutty Slut | "far From it" wouldn't know talent if he fell over it and it smacked him in the face. |
| 2005-10-22 18:38:58 | Slutty Slut | (those that have the same sound, but are spelled different, and have different meanings) Those are called "Synonyms", you cock eating shit-stain. I thoguht the story was good and the grammar was not that distracting, but we do need more quotation marks, Rusty. |
| 2005-10-23 10:51:08 | Slutty Slut | come on guys, we don't need all this critisism! Yeah, the constructive critisism is fine, but we don't need the rest. Well done on this Rusty Rusty! Yeah, I'm agreeing with some of the guys on this, it would be better in chapters. 8/10 xxx |