| 2004-09-05 05:41:08 |
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Spelling and grammar are lousy, still not a bad fuck story. Doesn't everybody fuck their sister? Never managed to butt fuck her though. |
| 2004-10-16 06:48:02 |
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the story was awesome but needed a little on grammer and skipped a few years of stuff... what about at college? did they do it even at college or did they go celibate for the school year? well whatever... |
| 2004-10-25 11:57:59 |
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I feel that if the spelling and gramer (not my spelling) were totally correct that a good bit of the feel would have been lost. I would rather have a good fuck any day than spell it correctly. Just a few words would have helped keep the time line understood. I thought it was great. |
| 2004-10-26 21:57:05 |
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The story was okay but seriously, help yourself to a damn grammer book. |
| 2004-10-30 12:41:00 |
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I liked the story |