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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-13 10:43:45 | Tale of Two Mothers. CH.1 | who in there right mind would fuck there mum |
| 2005-10-14 03:41:29 | Tale of Two Mothers. CH.1 | Clumsily written. If you're going to repost stories you've found, at least check them for simple flaws like breasts that change size. Are they G or DD cup? For that matter, are they firm or spongy? Whoever wrote this should also be told that breasts of either of those sizes do not jiggle; they sway. |
| 2005-10-14 14:36:29 | Tale of Two Mothers. CH.1 | I was ready to hate this story. About the time I read about the G cups, I was already thinking of venomous things to say. But as I read on, the story started to grow on me. I hate to admit it but it was OK. If you are going to take a simple formulaic story, you might as well keep it simple and get to the point, Which you did. This ain't no pulitzer prize winner, you used the word 'mommy' about 9,000 times and some of the descriptions were hilarious (burst luciously into orgasm? priceless). But the story did its job, it was a jackoff story, nothing more and nothing less. keep writing, just try to do a little better. |
| 2005-10-14 14:52:30 | Tale of Two Mothers. CH.1 | sick fuker son of a bitch man...fuckin his own mom...guess ull like 2 do the same??? ive only a word 4 u... MOTHERFUCKER |
| 2005-10-14 19:07:37 | Tale of Two Mothers. CH.1 | does that asshole ever shut the fuck up about how someone else writes their stories. did someone die and leave that asshole in charge? don't think so, fuck you archaic and your lousy ass stories, 1/10 |