| 2005-10-09 21:42:44 |
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not bad at all make part two |
| 2005-10-09 22:36:16 |
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I liked it, it needed some dialogue, but no speech fit the style. Maybe a bit longer? But it was awesome all the same. Keep writing! |
| 2005-10-10 00:32:24 |
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Not any better than a 2/10 |
| 2005-10-10 00:34:54 |
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this person is very detailed in what is happening but it doesn't really put a big picture in my mind to have a fantasy about it. |
| 2005-10-11 11:14:27 |
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pretty HOT so far, I look 4ward to more..... |