| 2005-10-12 03:53:54 |
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This is an excellent seduction fantasy. The description is so well written that the absence of dialogue is not a problem. The non-verbal communication comes across clearly. She doesn't know what she wants, but she wants to know, and surrenders to a confident teacher. Excellent! |
| 2005-10-15 17:06:29 |
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Awesome story... keep them cummmming. Don't worry about what people say, Your story was very good. |
| 2005-10-21 08:46:29 |
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please continue that was one of the best stories i have read. just brilliant and well punctuated, good job champ |
| 2005-11-11 14:23:52 |
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Ah, its so refreshing to see someone writing in something besides the same old 1st person narrative. Its a little too harlequinn for my personal taste, but I cannot fault the craftsmanship. Keep writing. |
| 2005-11-27 10:37:35 |
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Anyone that rated this one over 3/10 should go back to school. 3/10 |