| 2006-06-15 20:05:36 |
Evolution of a Brother and a Sister Love
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I wish my sister was like |
| 2007-03-02 19:18:35 |
Evolution of a Brother and a Sister Love
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if you can't finish a story then don't bother starting to write at all |
| 2007-03-04 18:15:19 |
Evolution of a Brother and a Sister Love
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Everyone knows you've got to have an ending, duhh |
| 2007-09-09 19:17:43 |
Evolution of a Brother and a Sister Love
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Too short and rushed. Slow down, describe more and give us some eroticism. 6/10. |
| 2007-11-25 03:00:57 |
Evolution of a Brother and a Sister Love
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you have the same story under the name of helping sis |