| 2004-05-09 01:32:11 |
Brother & sister incest
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alright..pussy eatting is grrrreat ..everyone knows it is..but please..dear god..make more dick sucking..or her sitting on top of his face..or something u know..more kinkier ...i wont bitch because i dont write storys and all but that isnt much of a turn on...n spelling..dear child..spell. |
| 2004-05-18 12:30:48 |
Brother & sister incest
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Due to my statements on other stories i simply wont even comment on this story. my rating 0/10 |
| 2004-06-29 23:13:59 |
Brother & sister incest
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it was ok, the spelling and grammer was lame and the storyline was unbelievable...but...it was slightly erotic...rather short though....i agree with DjTricKy... |
| 2004-07-17 01:08:49 |
Brother & sister incest
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boring....spell check.....too short.... didnt make sense.... but keep up the good work |
| 2004-08-27 09:54:13 |
Brother & sister incest
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check it again before post |