| 2006-02-21 12:23:23 |
Defend each other - Alex and John's story continues
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that was the shittiest story ever needs more action less bullshit |
| 2006-02-24 16:43:42 |
Defend each other - Alex and John's story continues
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A good story, almost a novel! Just one thing: I missed a little sex in it |
| 2006-03-28 15:41:38 |
Defend each other - Alex and John's story continues
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Not bad |
| 2006-07-04 19:54:07 |
Defend each other - Alex and John's story continues
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I like the story ! When will you continue ? |
| 2006-08-21 15:14:07 |
Defend each other - Alex and John's story continues
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Better written than part 1, although it needs either more sex or more story. You should consider glossing (replacing with narration) some of the dialog. |