| 2005-11-09 12:12:20 |
Denise and Eddie
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Excellent writing. Look forward to the next part. |
| 2005-10-08 22:53:30 |
Defend each other - Alex and John's story continues
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good storie i guess, i have to say i read it for the sex, not the "missing john part"> you should make this as a novel or somethong |
| 2005-10-09 22:41:27 |
Defend each other - Alex and John's story continues
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u reallly need to finish this it was a good story, needs more sex, 7/10 for lack of sex |
| 2005-10-10 00:21:32 |
Defend each other - Alex and John's story continues
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Crap 1/10 |
| 2005-10-10 04:31:05 |
Defend each other - Alex and John's story continues
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dude u could be a fucking novelist write more make it a book and send me a copy 10/10 but add more sex |