| 2005-11-04 19:32:31 |
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that was fucking alsome, pt 2 pls 10/10 |
| 2005-11-08 17:26:40 |
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luved it, friggin great, want more, i'm not usually into this kind of story but it rocked and i want parrt 2 quickly pls. 10/10 |
| 2005-11-12 03:31:24 |
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Great!!! Get to part two!! You should have her train to be a dominatrix or something!! She had all the right to seek revenge even though her ordeal was really hot!! One thing though, try to slow the pace a little. your action sentences need a little improvement. I kinda felt like I was running thru the story. lol-- otherwise, it had great content and characters!! |
| 2005-11-16 01:04:42 |
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friggin hot story, when is part 2 cummin, hurry up with it, can't wait to hear what happens. 10/10 |
| 2005-11-23 17:16:47 |
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hot 10/10 |