| 2006-02-03 15:13:07 |
Part 1: The Princess & The General
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Excellent story. Can't wait for part 2. |
| 2006-12-31 07:41:51 |
Part 1: The Princess & The General
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wht kinda story is this just to break a proudness one doesnt treat a gal like this shame on u trying bdsm on someone who doesnt want r like it r u a man at all a man who does this to a gal is not a man but a namardh |
| 2008-02-01 01:10:27 |
Part 1: The Princess & The General
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I felt the story was weak. Basically she was just raped. There needed to be more pleasurw in it for her. Maybe some emotional feelings on his side towards her would've made it more inticing. |
| 2005-10-16 11:54:32 |
Amanda's first time
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good keep wrighting |
| 2005-10-17 22:45:20 |
Amanda's first time
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i like this story!! it was good! keep on writin!!! |