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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-22 07:13:29 | Sarah 3 | the first one was crap. it did'nt improve with # 2 or # 3. I think someone wrote some- thing to beat off to! |
| 2005-10-23 00:42:34 | Sarah 3 | The concept was quite good, but the presentation was horrid. Work on your spelling, grammar, and add alot more details. The point of pieces such as this is to be able to imagine the actions, which isn't possible without vivid details. |
| 2005-10-30 11:46:48 | Sarah 3 | 1/10 |
| 2005-10-31 15:21:46 | Sarah 3 | I give the concept a 9 but the presentation a 2. If you had spent way more time on this story, ie lots of vivid details and descriptions, this would get a 10 in my book. As it stands, you get a 3. Keep trying, though! |
| 2005-12-28 18:19:50 | Sarah 3 | gd story. over v quick tho |