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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-01 16:19:01 | mother's away on business pt1 | u need to bring the daughter in, and archaic's right, too choppy, it dosen't flow |
| 2005-11-11 05:38:23 | mother's away on business pt1 | agrree with miker ..... but dude do write the next the story ha a lot of potential ..... i give it a 7 .. but u gotta improve ... try getting claire and katie in the story if u wanna describe it as incest ... |
| 2005-10-21 11:07:16 | mother's away on business pt2 | pretty good ill give it 7/10 |
| 2005-10-21 13:28:15 | mother's away on business pt2 | Not Bad At All. Shows Some Imagination They should have fucked him with the strap on for spanking them |
| 2005-10-21 21:20:12 | mother's away on business pt2 | doesnt take a lot of talent to write that stuff. 2/10 |