| 2005-11-12 21:52:49 |
Camping with Mom_(1)
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oogman or whoever, you are a damn liar. you do not know me, no one does and also I have quit leaving comments on anything anymore. |
| 2005-11-13 01:38:34 |
Camping with Mom_(1)
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"Off the rocks" |
| 2005-11-13 04:17:53 |
Camping with Mom_(1)
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Well what can I say BUT TOTAL CRAP |
| 2005-11-13 15:05:13 |
Camping with Mom_(1)
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dude thats FUCKIN' not true at all. no mother, no matter how nasty, would ever fuck her son like that. and i bet you wanted to do it again |
| 2005-11-14 08:16:08 |
Camping with Mom_(1)
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There is no way that this is true. Sorry to burst anyone's bubbles. But for constructive criticism, the enter key is your friend. Space out your paragraphs and fix your punctuation. All in all, aside from the story NOT being true, this is pretty decent. |