| 2005-12-07 19:33:05 |
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Pretty good story. Good idea, not bad, not bad at all. Ever heard of paragraphing though! Besides that the story had a nice flow, just like my jizm near the end of the story! |
| 2005-12-11 07:52:38 |
Camping with Mom_(1)
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really good mate !!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2005-12-11 21:22:43 |
Camping with Mom_(1)
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bravo bravo!!!! nice story man |
| 2005-12-11 23:10:04 |
Camping with Mom_(1)
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really good!! we shud hav more stories like urs , thats was awesome i cummed like two three times!! perfect 10/10! |
| 2005-12-12 17:26:31 |
Camping with Mom_(1)
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great story. can i meet your mom some day? |