| 2005-11-04 18:03:59 |
Sarah Followed Me
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It's awesome. Please give more!! |
| 2005-11-04 19:24:50 |
Sarah Followed Me
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10/10 Great story, I hope it continues |
| 2005-11-04 22:55:28 |
Sarah Followed Me
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Normally, the really long set up drives me crazy because most writer bore you to tears with the long intro. This was outstanding. The lead character had lots of depth, the setting was pretty strong and the descriptions were good. I thought you left Sarah a little shallow. but she was still very well assembled. Congrats on the good dialogue. I am not sure if any guy could have endured that much teasing for that long, sister or no sister, at some point Mr. happy spoo cannon is going to take the wheel. This was certainly one of the five best stories I have rated on the site, tres bien, keep writing. |
| 2005-11-05 00:11:02 |
Sarah Followed Me
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that was dope, just very enjoyable and a lot more realistic then others? |
| 2005-11-05 01:19:21 |
Sarah Followed Me
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I have to say the characters were well developed, and overall the story was amazing. The level of writing used here and the imagination put into the peice is nice. Keep it up, and I'd love to see sequals. 10/10 |