| 2005-11-05 21:07:59 |
Sarah Followed Me
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hey..wow that was really well written, i enjoyed it greatly..keep up the good work |
| 2005-11-06 01:22:12 |
Sarah Followed Me
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This is sensational. You are absolutely right to build up slowly and increase the tension in the reader. This had me hard throughout. It is the principle I use in my stories (see Jane). Next part soon please! |
| 2005-11-06 12:12:37 |
Sarah Followed Me
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Whoa dude, that was great! i wish they would have fucked tho, make a second part where they fuck each others brains out! 10/10 ! |
| 2005-11-06 16:26:31 |
Sarah Followed Me
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you suck |
| 2005-11-06 16:59:26 |
Sarah Followed Me
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That was an amazing story. Make a part two where they go all the way with eachother.. But make it long like that one with lots of foreplay. Awesome story! Just awesome! |