| 2005-11-17 21:53:47 |
My life so far ch. 1
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wow, dude i fell sorry for you and youre ass. at that point i think you should have left that girl cold nipples and all. and the cum lucking part was a bit much. |
| 2005-11-17 23:45:49 |
My life so far ch. 1
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nice perverted story, i got a huge hardon reading this. needs a sequel ---now. 9/10 |
| 2005-11-18 02:12:39 |
My life so far ch. 1
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Dont listen to everyone else... if they cant read a story unless it has paragraphs in it..... then they need to go back to english class. there was a few grammar mistakes but nothing too big. but honestly people.... its not a fucking book. everything was part of the action. your not supposed to make a new paragraph unless the action changes. and it was all dealing with sexual stuff. so go back to 6th grade fucking english class and try to comment again you stupid fucks. |
| 2005-11-18 07:58:54 |
My life so far ch. 1
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TWAS WELL WRITTEN NEED MORE PLEEEEEEEZ |
| 2005-11-18 12:45:08 |
My life so far ch. 1
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0/10 |