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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-18 15:22:46 | My life so far ch. 1 | Butt sex for boys can be as fun as anyone could want, and to be able to get a blowjob and dildoed at the same time, hooohaaaa!!! :-). There are some writing mistakes, and paragraphs are one. YOu shouldn't have one over three sentences long, and the next should lead with a tie to the previous. Otherwise ok, and i gv u an 8 r |
| 2005-11-18 16:19:04 | My life so far ch. 1 | "yelled into her pussy?" i bet the echo almost killed him. |
| 2005-11-20 17:02:13 | My life so far ch. 1 | Agree with Autumn--Nothing but crap. Couldn't even finish reading this bullshit. There's as much truth to this as there is in my being the next pope. Gave it a 0/10. |
| 2006-02-26 03:11:40 | My life so far ch. 1 | good story needs paragraghs-------bad |
| 2007-09-15 19:42:10 | My life so far ch. 1 | aint it nice to have a pervy sister |