| 2005-11-28 20:22:21 |
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fuck that was good more more more |
| 2005-12-01 01:57:23 |
The Boys & a dog at Play 2 - MEET AMBER
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to the haters if you dont like it dont read it. good story just needs to be a little longer and detailed, other than that great! |
| 2005-12-09 13:33:10 |
The Boys & a dog at Play 2 - MEET AMBER
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ok everyone.. this is to you dumbfucks that diss on like beastiality or whatever u diss on. first off. if u dont like it DONT READ IT! second off stop being dumbfucks... it tells u what kind of story it is before u even click on it! so stop being fuckheads. let the people write what they want. and i doubt u could even write anything good. so if ur not gonna like or even try to write one. then u cant say shit. got it? now... it was a good story dave. a little more details would have been good. and if u extended the scenes more. u know. makes it a bit longer and also is more explanatory of whats going on so it makes it better. but keep on writing despite what everyone else thinks. |
| 2005-12-10 17:42:49 |
The Boys & a dog at Play 2 - MEET AMBER
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i cant seem to find the first part tho |
| 2006-04-12 08:39:25 |
The Boys & a dog at Play 2 - MEET AMBER
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RAPIST PIECES OF SHI I WILL KILL YOU ALL AND SEND YOU TO YUR DEATH RAPISTS MUST ALLLLLLLL DIEEEEEEEEEEEEE |