| 2005-11-21 03:56:25 |
The Boys & a dog at Play 2 - MEET AMBER
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I skimmed the gay part, because that's not really my thing, but the group sex was pretty good. The whole story could have used a little more detail, but the style was very readable and flowed well. The encounter between Boss and Amber was especially abrupt, but the plotline has a lot of promise for part 3. Please tell us things like what Amber is thinking and feeling and doing while she is watching the two guys pleasure each other. You show tons of potential here; please finish the story! |
| 2005-11-21 11:48:15 |
The Boys & a dog at Play 2 - MEET AMBER
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You are one twisted mind and I love it, your juxtapositions are excellent,and i gave u a 10. |
| 2005-11-21 18:41:25 |
The Boys & a dog at Play 2 - MEET AMBER
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Bring on the sick fat cunt and I'll fuck her. 1/10 |
| 2005-11-22 16:29:55 |
The Boys & a dog at Play 2 - MEET AMBER
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great story, all these fucks shouldnt read a story catagorized under beastality and not want an animal in there. dumb fucks. Well man cant wait for pt 3, 10/10 |
| 2005-11-25 05:56:16 |
The Boys & a dog at Play 2 - MEET AMBER
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there is nothing better then watchin a guy or a girl get fucked by a dog or a girl getting her pussy licked out.........ive been doing it for years and fuck my dog nearly every night..........great story write more!!!!!!!!!!!! |