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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-25 00:11:37 | Down on the farm_(0) | Well, that was about as subtle as a 2x4. The descriptions of sex were good, as were the mechanics, but there was no sort of plot or storyline. It would be nice if the characters were described, and not just their sweaty bodies. There's plenty of potential for good stories here (five brothers and a widower!), or you could just write fuck scenes. Plenty of people will be just fine with that, too. One last thing: please remember that an anus is not self-lubricating. If the girl is going to get a freight train of a dick in her bum, she really needs *some* preparation. A torn rectum is not particularly sexy. |
| 2005-11-25 00:24:06 | Down on the farm_(0) | u-ug-ugh! |
| 2005-11-25 02:08:41 | Down on the farm_(0) | All i have to say is...MMMMMMMMMMMMMMM |
| 2005-11-25 03:27:50 | Down on the farm_(0) | That was one of the best i have read. Part Two PLEEEEEEESE 15/10 |
| 2005-11-25 03:29:09 | Down on the farm_(0) | nice stroy, keep writing 10/10 |