| 2005-11-25 03:32:22 |
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The sex and all that was good, but there was no build up, or character descritions. I think if you were to work on more details in those categories, you would of had a amazing story. But the sex desciriptions covered it enough for it to be a decent story. Nice job |
| 2005-11-25 07:34:57 |
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Nasty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good job 9/10 |
| 2005-11-25 07:56:25 |
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Fantastic. Excellent job! |
| 2005-11-25 08:49:21 |
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nice story,made me hot enough to jack off with you and daddy. write more 9/10 |
| 2005-11-25 14:02:58 |
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Slow start, nice build up to the inevitable conclusion. Gave it a 9. |