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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-25 17:21:33 | More Than Friends - part 1_(0) | Excellent, 10/10 in my book. OO, that may be true, but it doesn't mean that the reader can't give constructive criticism. Spelling and grammar don't make a good story; the content and background do. I'm about to go read number 2. Great start! |
| 2005-11-26 15:08:50 | More Than Friends - part 1_(0) | 10/10, i really enjoyed this story, it was awrsome. can't wait to read part 2. |
| 2005-11-26 17:05:26 | More Than Friends - part 1_(0) | make part 2 make part 2 |
| 2005-11-27 03:48:02 | More Than Friends - part 1_(0) | No, oogman, I'm not looking for hemingway, not that I like hemingway anyway. I just hope to find writing that would get an "A" if teachers graded porn. Reading a poorly written story is like watching a porno with bad sound an lighting. you get the idea that there is some definite fucking going on, but it takes a lot of mental effort to imagine what should be shown. Maybe I sounded too harsh. This was definitely worth my time, and it gave be a good erection, too. It was better in all ways than most of the stories on this site, and the small flaws didn't really get in the way of my enjoyment. |
| 2005-11-27 10:34:14 | More Than Friends - part 1_(0) | actually i agree with dreamer. You just skipped to the teenage years and when u hit the fucking it was all over quick as a flash. you should revise this story, mkae the end fucking part longer and then repost it. |