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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-28 16:01:57 | More Than Friends - part 1_(0) | Your story was shitty, There wasn't a lot of tlak about the fucking or anything I give you 5/10 |
| 2005-11-29 09:41:17 | More Than Friends - part 1_(0) | You're a fool, OriginalOogman. The style and structure can be good whether they are writing about fucking or faerie, about sex or seamanship. Or are you just looking for newspaper writers? |
| 2005-11-29 09:48:40 | More Than Friends - part 1_(0) | You're quite right, Oogman, I'm way out of line. Sorry, Dreamer: you're a better story analyst than I am, and I can learn a lot from you. We really could find the next Hemingway here. After all, Shakespeare was a bit saucy at times. |
| 2005-12-02 14:24:29 | More Than Friends - part 1_(0) | Dont listen to all those fuckers who say it sucked, It was well writen and well developed. Write a second part 10/10 |
| 2005-12-02 15:26:26 | More Than Friends - part 1_(0) | Good story, only one thing wrong really - are the characters American or British? The slang and sayings of two different nationalities do not go well together. Other than that, pretty fucking good. |