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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-01 19:18:31 | Columbian drug Lords Revenge part1 | Hi finc Im glad you followed my suggestion from literotica and started posting here. They are much more open on here. |
| 2005-12-01 19:41:10 | Columbian drug Lords Revenge part1 | forth coming attractions and pics |
| 2005-12-09 22:56:15 | Columbian drug Lords Revenge part1 | Damn that sounded so much like escobar it was scary. It was a good story but as usual I have to gripe a little. Would she really have been allowed to travel alone? I liked him, I liked the premise and the plot, but I had a hard time buying her charactor. She was just a little too. . . perfect, naive, defiant, etc. Also the sound effects were a little distracting (ugh, flut, bump, pop, phut, splurrt), dont tell us the noises, make us hear them. A good read, mayhaps a second chapter in the works where she hooks up with an ex SEAL? I hope the infomer has a cyanide capsule in his cheek. keep writing. |
| 2006-10-01 11:27:06 | Columbian drug Lords Revenge part1 | Hi Archaic thanks for the feedback but just on the girl the idea is that there are no experienced people left to do the job-shes absolutley naive about what shes getting in to. All my babes are ultra perfect because I write for sexual gratification they're almost comic book in their appearance. In the 90s officials were kidnapped almost everyday and it was impossible to guard everyone (even if you could find uncorruptable guards) I,m starting chap 2 soon, hope to hear from you again |
| 2007-04-10 12:37:02 | Columbian drug Lords Revenge part1 | karim 1970 marouc |