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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-28 17:03:51 | Bad Movies | Sock man's right, it was just a piece of crap and nothing more. 1/10 |
| 2005-11-28 21:02:47 | Bad Movies | hell of bad |
| 2005-11-28 21:41:53 | Bad Movies | The story couldnt get much better in my opinion. Most of the problems I find in it is with the paragraph thing. Its really hard to read it the way it is. Other than that I dont think its all that bad. Dont listen to those douche-bags. Keep working on it and break up the thoughts into paragraphs. Im looking forward to more of your stories. |
| 2005-11-29 05:07:15 | Bad Movies | That was fucking shit,dont give up your day job. |
| 2005-11-29 05:09:47 | Bad Movies | What ---- a paragraph that is 80 lines long? Go take some writing lessons. You need them bad. Real baaaaaaad. 1/10 |