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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-28 11:46:11 | last day of school_(0) | Sorry about that supercoolman, didn't mean it. Not a bad story, but your spelling is a bit out. Slow the pace down a bit: use some padding. Keep writing and you'll get better |
| 2005-11-28 11:50:04 | last day of school_(0) | Yeah, I agree. Not bad, but check the spelling: draft the story in a wordprocessor, then use the spellchecker. |
| 2005-11-28 11:51:54 | last day of school_(0) | After you've used the spellchecker fill in some padding between the sentences to slow the pace a bit. Then spellcheck again. Then select all and copy into the site. Keep writing |
| 2005-11-28 12:01:27 | last day of school_(0) | yeah, wich heaven do u liv in................da 11th?? try to sound a lil bit realistic, even if its fiction tat u r riting |
| 2005-11-28 17:02:24 | last day of school_(0) | Never mind I changed my mind after rereading it again. 3/10 |