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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-03 23:57:41 | last day of school_(0) | Well I can't add any moe than what was said in the 22 other coments...lol. Hint Microsoft Word! |
| 2005-12-06 20:58:05 | last day of school_(0) | umm, it started, and then just went, and ended, like wtf man! |
| 2005-12-13 20:49:26 | last day of school_(0) | how could that ever happen?were you at FUCKING ELEMENTARY SCHOOL? |
| 2005-12-26 11:58:12 | last day of school_(0) | dude, there were so many things wrong with this fucking story, i can't even count them. Well, first off, eighth graders with DDs and 8 inches? Dude, the guy would have a max of 4 inches, and (although possible), the girl would not have DDs. You lack any fucking details or character backgrounds, and the story was shit. Oh, and what the hell's up with that scene at the computer? "my you've grown"...? Just give up now, and never write another story!! |
| 2006-01-05 19:44:11 | last day of school_(0) | so bad it is not ever worth a comment |