| 2005-12-17 09:21:23 |
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was that it??? this isn't a message in a christmas card you know. its a story, and it needs to be so much longer. you suck. go to hell. die. i wish i hadda 3 foot cock. |
| 2005-12-17 12:33:36 |
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Decent story, but it'd be better if you had the slightest grasp of the English language. |
| 2005-12-18 02:33:43 |
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well first off, in the discription of yourself it says that you are female....well if this story is true, then when were you telling the story from the guy's perspective? other than that, i thought it was an ok story! i agree with everybody else though....it should have been longer!! anyways keep writing!!! |
| 2005-12-18 08:26:45 |
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I agree with you, WetCunt. I too gave it a 10/10...It was a great story..I want to hear more about fucking the third girl, Carly.. More, More, More...Bob |
| 2005-12-19 01:30:54 |
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This story was riddled with problems, both contextual and grammatical. I recommend you take some writing courses 5/10 |